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Old 12-19-2004, 10:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: First Post.... Tell me what you think..
Old 12-19-2004, 11:38 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Welcome to the board. The shot seems well exposed. I personally prefer shots where the model is happy rather than mad or unhappy looking as she is in this one. I also don't like seeing part of the head cropped off. Also the thumb in the lower left seems to be coming out of nowhere. It would be better cloned or cropped out.



Model is Lindsey. I was experimenting with cropping and framing in this photo and as you can see it has a problem also.

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Old 12-19-2004, 11:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the info..

Here is another one from the same session.


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Old 12-20-2004, 06:29 AM   #4 (permalink)
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The model's facial expression is fine. It matches well with the net and leather look. You might have her pick up her chin a bit more, show off her neck a little more. Maybe make a more bold/defiant statement etc.

The background in the upper right, I would have a light shining off the background, or a hair light shining down on her hair to highlight her hair keeping it seperate from the background creating a litle more of a 3d look.So you could see where her hair stops and background begins.

I agree with Mr Smith on thumb and head . I would either include the whole hand or try to get rid of the thumb. And include all of her head unless it's deformed in some way.

Overall you did a nice job. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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