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Go Ahead Rip It Apart Fellow Photographers
Old 12-19-2004, 06:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Let me know what you think, Please
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Re: Go Ahead Rip It Apart Fellow Photographers
Old 12-19-2004, 07:30 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Okay here I go...

1) The picture has a little too less detail.
2) I would crop the image a little off the top.

That is it.
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Re: Go Ahead Rip It Apart Fellow Photographers
Old 12-19-2004, 07:59 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Good shot, let's see... I'd crop out all the empty black space above her head, probably cropping well into her head to focus attention, and then also in closer on the left side until it touched into her hip.

The expression is pretty good, you might want to get her "bubbling" a tiny bit more. And next time, maybe try to get her to extend more, be taller and more proud, with a slightly taller body and longer neck -- subjective thing, nuances, bah humbug. Thanks for the good image!

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Re: Go Ahead Rip It Apart Fellow Photographers
Old 12-19-2004, 09:15 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I wouldn't touch the area above her head. That area doesn't take away from the photograph in any way what so ever. I haven't seen alot of half head missing photos that I have liked much at all. Now if some person's head is deformed, by all means crop it out. If not, don't make yourself seem like you weren't paying attention and cutoff a body part when ya pushed the shutter button.
Cropping is a good thing. But never over do it. Cropping off a part of a body part to direct a persons view can be ok some times. But not alot. You can make a much better statement with creative lighting and focus than with cutting off part her head. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

I would have her turn her face a little more towards the camera. Her nose would not seem so big.

Her expression I would either have her go with much less of a smile, maybe try to get that "I know something you dont" kind of mona lisa smile [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smirk.gif[/img].

Or have her go with a bigger brighter happier expression [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img].

Or even go with a totally shocked look [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/shocked.gif[/img] like you caught her off gaurd I think that would go great with that pose.

Also maybe some different colors with the same pose. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

EXPERIMENT and be creative. hehehe
Now me saying all these things, please do not take them negatively. You did dam good here. A little tweaking here and there and you will have a superb photo indeed.

John
 
 
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