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A sheep amongst the wolves...
Old 12-17-2004, 01:41 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi guyz. I am going to be brave and post some images from yesterday for critique. You can beat me up....Model is Mellisa Kay from Norfolk VA. She has a portfolio here on GG. Thanks alot!






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Old 12-17-2004, 10:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Excellent Pictures, I like the cropping only down point i would say there is a little bit of a orange colour cast on picture 3. My 2p(UK).

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What kind of a light set-up are you using?
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Old 12-19-2004, 07:39 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hi Casey,
I was gone for the weekend. I think we met at Austin Supershoot. My lights are 2 AB 800s. The first 2 were shot using grids. And the last was a 45" White bounce Umbrella and a 10 degree hailight. The last one has an 81C warming filter on the lens.

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Old 12-20-2004, 05:48 AM   #5 (permalink)
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In the first shot, the bright white above and surrounding her head really throws me off. It's like it doesn't belong in an otherwise low-key shot. I like her pose though. There is something about the black material on the inside of her right thigh that doesn't sit right with me for some reason. It looks out of place.

In the second shot, the pose looks very uncomfortable. The plane that runs from the bottom of her foot to her butt is tilted upward toward her feet making it look like she's falling backward.

The third one I like. I wonder how it would have looked with a fire in what I'm assuming is a fireplace behind her. On my monitor her skin looks very red but I know that varies from monitor to monitor.

Overall, I like the images but would have done a few things differently. That being said, I'm no expert (nor do I even attempt to play one of TV) and I don't even know that I could do any better. I can only respond as my mind perceives things to be. She is certainly a beautiful lady! I'd like to see more of your work with her. Her expression is the same in all three shots. Perhaps you have some with her smiling big??

Thanks for sharing and have a great Christmas and New Years.

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Wolves... Naw, just a few friendly coyotes here...
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A lot of it has been said already, so I'll keep my comments very short.

Image 1. Wrinkled stocking top and that bit of material on her thigh.

Image 2. Pose.

Image 3. Jewelry, especially what appears to be an engagement/wedding ring (third finger left hand).

'nuff said...

She is very attractive.








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