but since you asked.
She has a nice smile. But there's too much of it. If she had taken it down just a bit I think the images would have turned out much better. There is also something going on with her eyebrows that makes the left eye look higher than the right. That gives her face a strange sort of forced look.
The leather/vinyl jacket hangs very straight on the sides, and the sides run parallel to the open front. Thus images 1 and 2 don't flatter what appears to be a very nice figure.
Image 3 has a strange right arm. Since you can't see her hand, it looks like the lower arm is missing. I'd be very tempted to pull that image into PhotoShop and take the right arm out from about breast level down and maybe even a little of the jacket to avoid a straight line down her front. I'd aim to go from breast level to the jeans with a slight indent to mirror the shadow on her tummy.
The lighting seems pretty flat. I'd have preferred a bit more shadow to give her face/body more shaping.
But whaddo I know...