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Old 12-11-2004, 02:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is my first contribution to GG. Looking forward to your comments and suggestions! The model is a girl from Iran, she normally is not into modelling.




 
 
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Looks like a great model to me... As for the image. I think it looks a bit soft and the colors seem a little off. Keep on posting and welcome....

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Shows that Iranian women are nice human beings also. Good photo - a balance of a friendly expression and an attractive subject.
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It looks a little hot to me. The arm is not quite as nice as it could be. Maybe instead of having the elbow pointing right at the lense, you could have her bend it back a little more show it some forearm? Also this outfit helps, but normally when you pose a model like that she gets some very unflattering folds in her skin above her hips. She's a great looking girl and you're of to a good start.

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As gentle as can be.....the subject is cast in an over-exposed light. Soften the light with a lite disc, maybe gold.

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First off, welcome to GG, and secondly, not too shabby. Needs a little bit of work, mabye some added density and saturation, but I don't do a lot of color work.

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