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Rookie Shot please help
Old 12-01-2004, 09:23 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I'm just starting out please look at this one and let me know you thoughts
 
 
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Hey, hey! But a little fill flash wouldn't hurt this lovely shot.
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Old 12-01-2004, 10:50 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Don't know that I would lump you in the "rookie" catagory. Just looked at your PMO site and you've got some really nice stuff there.

As far as this photo goes, I'd kind of like more light on her face. A reflector would have made it a real stunning shot.

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Old 12-02-2004, 12:35 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I agree with the need for a reflector or flash fill. Also, her left leg is distracting. I'm assuming she's not an amputee...would try the shot with her leg bent more of a triangle shape so we see it side view.(hope this makes sense, it's late and I'm at a loss for words). Her leg just disappears because of the perspective.
These are only minor things and other than that, the image is very good. And, of course, the model is great!

Keep it up.



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Old 12-02-2004, 02:18 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for the help I'll keep working.
 
 
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Thanks for the help I'll keep working
 
 
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