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Old 11-28-2004, 05:31 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I am just wanting some feedback on a few of my head shots and which to use for my comp card
 
 
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just an opinion but your expression looks forced, mainly in number 2
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In the first shot your right arm seems to take over the shot and it leads me away from and out of the shot.

In the second one, I can see the edge of your left hand and that aolng with your right hand distracts me. I would also agree with tim that I am not fond of your expression in this shot.

I would think that you may have better head shots for your comp card.

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Old 11-28-2004, 08:26 PM   #4 (permalink)
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The first shot is a winner.. it just needs to be cropped differently. If there is enough room, you could crop to the right. If not.. a centered verticle would be great as well. The second shot isn't as strong. It looks like you're clenching your jaw too tightly, or like there's something in your mouth. Keep the first one though.

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Old 11-29-2004, 12:44 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I cropped the picture and it looks better I think, I dont think I look posed at all, looks very casual to me from the typical style shooting I do, but thank you for the comments

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