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Old 11-22-2004, 06:45 AM   #1 (permalink)
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The image is beautiful in its simplicity and eroticism, but I would have to say that the tonality of black bra does not work as it draws the eye away from the models' faces. Fortunately, this is easily improved with a color change in Photoshop.

Also, Deavyn's left hand distracts. I really want to see the background seperating them, just hinting at the kiss that is to come. Were the hand removed, it would look as if she had it further to her left, and would work.

But overall, a very powerful image. Well done!

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