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Old 11-21-2004, 07:56 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Alex,

Welcome to GG. You'll find lots of great stuff here.

I gotta be honest, I don't really like a lot of things about this shot. The shirt is wrinkled. There's a big dunno what it is on her forehead. And her right eye almost dissappears into her eye socket. All except the shirt, these things are easily fixed in PS. The color scheme is nice and the concept is cute (senior portrait?).

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Oops, forgot my image.

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I like the lighting and the color. I agree the shirt being wrinkled is distracting.
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Thanks for the comments. Yes, the shirt is overly wrinkled. It's a silk shirt and that's all she had at the time. I was really trying to get down the technique of lighting a black background with a colored gel. Unfortunately, I didn't realize my fill light wasn't opening up the eyes until after the fact. I'm still learning my way through Photoshop, that was the most I could brighten the eyes without them looking completely artificial.
Oh well, that's why they make big compact flash cards. Thanks again.
 
 
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