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This newbie just doesn\'t give up
Old 11-02-2004, 11:26 PM   #1 (permalink)
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All,

Here is another photo of Michelle I took at Rolando's workshop. Please let me know what you think. Thanks,

Luis

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Re: This newbie just doesn\'t give up
Old 11-03-2004, 12:11 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Looks good. Only things that bother me are the hair partially covering her right eye and the slight visibility of the tattoo on her left shoulder.
Model, pose, and lighting are good.

Keep up the good work.

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Re: This newbie just doesn\'t give up
Old 11-03-2004, 12:16 AM   #3 (permalink)
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OK...I looked again. So shoot me! For some reason I'm in a really picky mood right now. I also noticed the tattoo on her lower left back. And, in this case, I would probably not show any of the nipple. One is showing, one isn't. Although, it offers quite the tease.
Now I'll give others a chance...
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Re: This newbie just doesn\'t give up
Old 11-03-2004, 12:30 AM   #4 (permalink)
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I like it Luis. Good job!!!

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Re: This newbie just doesn\'t give up
Old 11-03-2004, 05:14 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Fantastic! Wouldn't change a thing.

Thanks for sharing... Don't give up you do beautiful work.

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Old 11-03-2004, 10:13 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Jason,

I agree about the hair over the eye. Not sure about the tattoo. Whats the general concensus in glamour photography about tatoos? Should they be there? Should they be PS out? Or is it really up to the mood and affect you are after?

Glad you are in a picky mood cause thats what I want... The only way for me to learn is to get feedback. You are right... there is just a hint of a tatoo on her lower back. Now that you mention it, it is distracting cause you really can't see what it is and it looks like a dark blemish.

I liked that part of the nipple was showing. It was meant to tease.

Thanks for your suggestions and thoughts.

Luis
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Allen,

Glad you liked it.

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Jim,

Thanks Jim. It's much appeciated. Glad you like it.

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