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Still catching up - Paula
Old 10-28-2004, 11:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Still catching up work from the beginning of this month... here are a few of Paula.











As usual, comments, questions, or critques are both solicted and gladly accepted.

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Old 10-29-2004, 05:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Wayne:

#1 The background isn't working for me here. Since she's young she wears the shadows well but I think I'd like to see a little more reflected light on her face.

#2 Pose, expression-especially expression-and cropping are right on the money but she has a lot of hotspots through her hair that detract from her perfectly lit face.

#3 Here the background looks like it belongs. Classic senior portrait but her pose and smile looks forced and I know she has the rest of her left arm because I've seen it in the other pictures.

#4 Is a really nice portrait and brings out what you've captured all along-her wholesome beauty. But I like #3 the best.

Good job.

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Old 10-29-2004, 06:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Hey Man... I like #3 a lot... What was your setup?
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Old 10-29-2004, 08:59 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Casey,

Pretty simple, really... large softbox up and to her left... a gelled flood on the background.

Here's another one

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Old 10-29-2004, 09:01 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Lemme try that again (darn it!)

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Old 10-29-2004, 09:03 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks, Rick... appreciate the crit!

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