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n5wd 10-28-2004 11:34 PM

Still catching up - Paula
 
Still catching up work from the beginning of this month... here are a few of Paula.


http://webpages.charter.net/n5wd/Images/Paula7.jpg

http://webpages.charter.net/n5wd/Images/Paula5.jpg

http://webpages.charter.net/n5wd/Images/Paula6.jpg

http://webpages.charter.net/n5wd/Images/Paula4.jpg


As usual, comments, questions, or critques are both solicted and gladly accepted.

Wayne
RWD Photograhy

rixafter6 10-29-2004 05:52 PM

Re: Still catching up - Paula
 
Wayne:

#1 The background isn't working for me here. Since she's young she wears the shadows well but I think I'd like to see a little more reflected light on her face.

#2 Pose, expression-especially expression-and cropping are right on the money but she has a lot of hotspots through her hair that detract from her perfectly lit face.

#3 Here the background looks like it belongs. Classic senior portrait but her pose and smile looks forced and I know she has the rest of her left arm because I've seen it in the other pictures.

#4 Is a really nice portrait and brings out what you've captured all along-her wholesome beauty. But I like #3 the best.

Good job.

Rick D.

http://www.garageglamour.com/portfol...fter6/5c6c.jpg

photoTexas 10-29-2004 06:07 PM

Re: Still catching up - Paula
 
Hey Man... I like #3 a lot... What was your setup?
http://www.garageglamour.com/portfol...Texas/a48c.jpg

n5wd 10-29-2004 08:59 PM

Re: Still catching up - Paula
 
Casey,

Pretty simple, really... large softbox up and to her left... a gelled flood on the background.

Here's another one

http://http://webpages.charter.net/n...es/Paula10.jpg

n5wd 10-29-2004 09:01 PM

Re: Still catching up - Paula
 
Lemme try that again (darn it!)

http://webpages.charter.net/n5wd/Images/Paula10.jpg

n5wd 10-29-2004 09:03 PM

Re: Still catching up - Paula
 
Thanks, Rick... appreciate the crit!

Wayne


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