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Old 10-18-2004, 07:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: One more for your critique...
Old 10-21-2004, 09:53 AM   #2 (permalink)
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your shadows aren't as dark as they should be. it ends up looking pretty flat.


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Re: One more for your critique...
Old 10-21-2004, 10:02 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks Sean,

I lightened it up some. I can play with it and see how it looks.

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Old 10-21-2004, 05:03 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I really like this shot. Her 'look' is sultry, almost angry; lots of emotion there, The lighting is excellent, as is the pose. The model is simply ooutstanding! My only complaint is that I think you went a bit overboard lightening the image. Her thigh is blown out and it has a flat overall look to it. Darken it just a bit with P'shop curves and add a just a little density to the thigh and you'll have an absolutely killer shot.

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Old 10-21-2004, 10:03 PM   #5 (permalink)
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i think your shot--which is a great shot--would have way more impact, i.e., more dramatic value, if the levels were set properly. the lack of contrast takes away from the image, IMHO.

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Thanks gang for the critique. It seems the overall responce is to darken it up. I will revisit this shot and repost it. Thanks again. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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