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Old 10-18-2004, 11:00 AM   #1 (permalink)
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We had a photo session together with GG member Cserdan this weekend. Here are the results.
I would be glad to see some feedback on these.

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Old 10-18-2004, 11:06 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Very Nice, I like the 3rd and 4th images best.
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Old 10-18-2004, 11:37 AM   #3 (permalink)
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They're all nice. My personal favorite is the second, in spite of the "chopped arm" leading out of the frame. I recognize that that's a compositional problem, but I can't suggest an effective alternative that would retain the feel of this image.

Thanks for sharing.
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Old 10-18-2004, 11:46 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Very very nice, beautiful model.
What was your lighting?
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Old 10-18-2004, 11:56 AM   #5 (permalink)
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These images show some beautiful work with a beautiful lady. The lighting is excellent, the composition is excellent and I can't add anything. Well, just one thing. In the third image the shadow of her nose extends too far downward; it appears to touch her upper lip and that causes it to dominate the face.
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Old 10-18-2004, 12:09 PM   #6 (permalink)
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#2 is great...Welcome...
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One flash head with a 10° honeycomb on the 3rd and 4th. Little room, so some reflectance possible without any reflectors.
1st and 2nd, one softbox from camera right very close to modell.
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Oops. I missed.
The 4th also lit with one softbox, but from camera left and higher.
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cserdan? who is cserdan do you know him? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

Here are mine:
MUA: Geréb Csilla
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Old 10-18-2004, 12:44 PM   #10 (permalink)
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No pics from downstairs? [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

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