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Critiques my pics taken of model Kristina Lyn
Old 10-09-2004, 03:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here is a recent photoshoot I shot of my fiance Kristina Lyn. Her website is www.krislyn.org I want some feedback, as the 20D is my first D-slr and this was my first photoshoot of her.





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The first thing you do is get ahold of a lawyer....
Old 10-09-2004, 05:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The very first thing you need to do is get ahold of a lawyer... have him draw up a pre-nup for you and Kristina Lyn that says even if you ever break up, she'll still model for you!!!! Beautiful lady.. very good images. The only nit, if you will, is on #3 where the shadow of the phone is a bit distracting
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Wow! She is lovely! She reminds me very much of my neighbor. You have a beautiful model there, sir, and I hope you'll share more images with us.

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Convinced me.....
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To call on Monday and order the D20 I've been contemplating.

Oh, please tell me it comes with a model like this as a bonus accessory. Very attractive.

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Re: The first thing you do is get ahold of a lawyer....
Old 10-09-2004, 06:02 PM   #5 (permalink)
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The very first thing you need to do is get ahold of a lawyer... have him draw up a pre-nup for you and Kristina Lyn that says even if you ever break up, she'll still model for you!!!! Beautiful lady.. very good images. The only nit, if you will, is on #3 where the shadow of the phone is a bit distracting

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lol thanks for the lawyer advice. This coming wed if the weather is nice and sunny out then i'll be doing a shoot of her on railroad tracks going over a bridge. She'll be wearing all pink short skirt with pink bra and pink fishnet top. I'll post the pics when i'm finished post-processing them.
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Re: Critiques my pics taken of model Kristina Lyn
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Why worry about the weather? I think your proposed setup with the pink lingerie would look good on a gray gloomy day, or even a light rain, just be sure to have some fill light or reflector ready. I agree she has potential. My only criticism is the middle shot with the barrels. Its kind of busy, the barrels are distracting and so are her hands on her knees - very busy and too much pressure on them. Look for more interesting light like your bottom shot, and a background she can really work into.

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Re: Critiques my pics taken of model Kristina Lyn
Old 10-15-2004, 09:25 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Hey Andy.........what barrels? Just had to say that.
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