No, it doesn't seem to set the mood other than a sort of motel look. I think the pose is a bit forced also and like the first reviewer said, the bed is way to prominent. You'd probably have to have a much more subdued lighting to get a really romantic effect. But then, we don't know what you were striving for.
Here is the required photo that I must post to critique your photo. It illustrates using lighting for mood. A girl waiting expectantly for her boyfriend to show up is lit by the window she is peeking through.