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Old 10-05-2004, 05:28 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Does the lighting set the mood?

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Old 10-05-2004, 06:49 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Your model seems to be lost in the "busy"ness of the bedspread. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/frown.gif[/img] A solid color would have probably brought more attention to her.

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No, it doesn't seem to set the mood other than a sort of motel look. I think the pose is a bit forced also and like the first reviewer said, the bed is way to prominent. You'd probably have to have a much more subdued lighting to get a really romantic effect. But then, we don't know what you were striving for.



Here is the required photo that I must post to critique your photo. It illustrates using lighting for mood. A girl waiting expectantly for her boyfriend to show up is lit by the window she is peeking through.

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