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\"Mississippi Lady\"
Old 10-05-2004, 05:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: \"Mississippi Lady\"
Old 10-05-2004, 09:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The girl looks great, nice figure. The picture seems like a snapshot though. The lighting looks flat and the models expression is sorta bored or "is this what you want? tell me what to do." I would have taken a higher point of view as well. Try moving the lights to 45 degree angle up and off of the camera's axis, right or left. A hair light would help also. I don't mean to sound harsh, but the image looks point-and-shooty. I bet you could have a ton of fun refining your technique with such wonderful talent though! Keep at it.


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Posing problem
Old 10-05-2004, 11:37 PM   #3 (permalink)
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The way you have her sitting on the bed makes her legs look quite large. If you have her raise up a little rather than sit on the legs, this will improve that aspect of the photo. Lighting is fairly flat and does not look natural for a bedroom setting. If shooting in the bedroom, the light should like it is light in a bedroom. The background items on the right are distracting and do not add to the photo. The outfit does not go well with the bedspread. Hope this helps.

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The girl is on a bed lit by a window right by her bed hence the bright quality of the light to create a natural setting for "sleeping beauty".

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Re: Posing problem
Old 10-06-2004, 09:38 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Lovely model, great pose but maybe a bit different expression on the face ?

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