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Old 10-04-2004, 06:49 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Just need a little critique?
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Re: Photo Review please
Old 10-04-2004, 08:01 PM   #2 (permalink)
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1) This picture is a little small for detailed critiquing. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

2) The model might need her left elbow in future: I hope you saved it. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

Just teasing. That's my way of saying that cutting off a limb is sometimes okay, but cutting out the *middle* of it looks a little odd.

3) I'm as guilty of this as anybody else but a tight garment of stretch fabric always looks better pulled down snug to get the wrinkles out.

4) I might have tried to get those flyaway hairs, especially the ones to camera right.

5) The model's expression is a little blah considering she has either flat makeup or no makeup. If she had some lipstick on that gave her mouth some pop, she could get away with that neutral expression a little better, I think.

6) The lighting, AFAICT, is not bad, and the pose suits the model's look. Other than the flyaways - which is purely a matter of opinion - her hair looks good, too. I *think* she's got great eyes. (I need a bigger picture.)

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Re: Photo Review please
Old 10-05-2004, 12:57 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice work Dan. I agree with Marc on this one, it would be nice to see the elbow on the right side. Otherwise, just the color seems a bit blue. Great model, pose, and lighting.

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Old 10-05-2004, 10:05 AM   #4 (permalink)
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1) I would raise the camera level just a bit.

2) The picture is a bit small.

3) One thing that came to mind is her eyes.
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Old 10-05-2004, 07:50 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Thanks for the replies. Thanks for calling my attention to the wrinkles but I guess it goes with the backdrop?
The picture was created by using a fan to blow her hair but after viewing the picture I do think that the fan affected her left eye (lazy eye) so that was a little over done. I also used the black scarf to soften the image.
I also had to lighten the photo’s quite a bit (PS) because later I had my flash meter checked and it was a stop off.
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Old 10-05-2004, 08:10 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I’m trying to make the pictures bigger but not sure what is going on
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