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Old 09-27-2004, 10:55 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Just joined and posted 1st photo of a shoot this past Saturday with Alana Curry. Would like to hear your comments.


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Old 09-28-2004, 01:48 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Love her lips, I also sometimes try to get that semi kissing lips and you hit the nail on the head with subtility.

Great model, great shot.

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Old 09-28-2004, 09:24 AM   #3 (permalink)
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The composition and focus is great. I think that the Levels could be adjusted to give this image more POP. You could post it in the "post production forum" and let some of the people here edit it and post it back for you to see the difference.

Thanks for sharing,
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Regarding Jim's comments about pop and levels. That was lost in converting to jpeg and sizing for the site. In printing on a dye-sub, she jumps off the paper, and the blacks are very black.

A tip is welcome on prep for web presentation [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img].

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It's a good portrait. The lighting, composition, facial expression and so forth are all good. The only change I would suggest would be to allow just a bit more room under the chin. that would keep her chin from being just a little tight against the bottom and also raise her eyes a bit more above the center if the image area.

In my own experience, I've found that preparing an image for printing and for for the web require slightly differing adjustments. All that's lacking in the shown version a just a little contrast.
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