Perhaps, Gekkeikan is paying you to push their cheap plum wine? Or is your client the pretty red head? :P
I'm not sure what you want to be the focus in the image. If this is supposed to be a portait, I usually go for a minimalist style vs. a more environmental approach. I would get rid of any background distractions (the trees and props) and just shoot your model. Try shooting with telephoto lens instead of a wide angle to isolate the model from the environment.
If you have interaction with props, I would match the background, props and clothing more carefully. The sunglasses, and oriental top just don't seem to go well...
BTW - if you are looking to get rid of the shadows from the wine glass across the face just reposition the model or get a reflector to bounce some light back on her face.
Aloha from Hawaii,