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Sharon a first time model
Old 09-05-2004, 04:23 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Believe it or not but Sharon never before had a session.
I was impressed.







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A most interesting makeup treatment.
Old 09-05-2004, 06:03 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Was that your idea, the model's or the MUA?

It also looks like you have done a lot of postproduction softening on these images. Nicely done.
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Re: Sharon a first time model
Old 09-05-2004, 08:10 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I must not be artsy-fartsy enough.(can we say fartsy?) [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]

I think the eyes could definately speak for themselves without the makeup. Would love to see some cleaner images of this model.

If I could only find a model like that.
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Re: A most interesting makeup treatment.
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Hi,
The Makeup was an idea of our MUA indeed [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img] but I liked it also.
I love the more extreme makeups.

The eyes certainly can speak for themself, and maybe I will do a session with her with natural makeup in the future [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img].

Only on the first photo there is some softening on the skin in process, the other shots are my standard workstyle, only a lighten layer.

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Re: Sharon a first time model
Old 09-05-2004, 09:09 AM   #5 (permalink)
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She's stunning! I like the pose in the second shot. Looks like she has a promising modelling career ahead of her.
 
 
The first one I love
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The other two?
Well frankly, I'm getting tired of the head-thrown-back-let's-look-up-her-nose pose.

Plus, with your lighting, you have made her nostrils the most prominent thing in the second shot. Also, either get her all the way wet or not at all. There are too many dry areas. The most notable of these is her left breast mainly becuase a highlight spotlights that it is dry.

This is all counterbalanced by how strong the first image is. The crop, the retouching, etc. I like it all. I'd love to see more of this woman.

You have also done a good high key background. Most people overlight it and then get blow back (lighting bouncing off the background and flaring into the lens). Good high key is difficult to achieve.

Overall, I'd say you are to be congratulated. Good work.

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Re: The first one I love
Old 09-13-2004, 01:03 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Riosun,
Thanks on the remarks.
The throw the head back in this post is indeed a bit too much, on the complete session it are only 5% of the shots [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img].
Somehow however I love that pose the most.

Any suggestion on what poses to look for to get a similair effect ?

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Re: Sharon a first time model
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While I am not a fan of all of the eyemakup, they are very nice shots and Sharon is a beautiful woman. With the combination of the model and the excellent photography, I can overlook the makeup. The makeup thing is just my own personal taste, you obviously have shown me that it can be tastefully done.

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