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Old 09-01-2004, 07:34 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Its new pics of my girlfriend and I , We both model full time and want some feedback them
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It's so hard to tell on a small image like this, but to me it looks like her right eye has been blackened in the color image... kind of a turn off. The monochrome image is more pleasing... The light gives both image a stark, harsh look - was that what you were wanting?

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You guys look good together!

A couple of observations. First, I think Wayne made a good observation about the makeup and the way it looks in the first image. I would suggest that she have her eye open a little -- similar to the second image. It reduces the large area of color around her eye. She could also do a cleaner -- more "bedroom" -- makeup. Cleaner around the eye -- crisp, not colored.

The other observation I'd share is the color of your shorts. The black creates a void that is kind of "missing" in the image. Maybe white or grey?

Looking good!

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I have to agree with the make up in the first shot and add that your left hand seems to come out of no where unlike the second shot where we see more of your arm. I think if you could have buried your hand in both shots it would have made a big difference.

By the way, I'm just 24 miles across the state line if you two want to get together foir a shoot. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

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