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Does Jill\'s photo work in spite of the shadow?
Old 08-29-2004, 11:53 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Love the texture in this image...I believe it tells it's own story. This was taken out on a shoot in company with Jerry Brown down at South Padre Island, Texas in April. I'm still trying to get past the shadow that crosses Jill's face...but I think this photo works. What say you?

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Overall, I say yes because of the other great lines in the image. For example, the position of her legs and arms. Would it be better if the shadow wasn't there? Yes. But generally, I liked the photo. I also checked out your portfolio, and thought it was excellent. Thanks for sharing your work.
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Re: Does Jill\'s photo work in spite of the shadow?
Old 08-29-2004, 04:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It seems a little much for me. I like the position of the hands and legs. I dig that she has a camera strapped to her. But the shadow across the face may be a little much.

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Re: Does Jill\'s photo work in spite of the shadow?
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Would it be better if the shadow wasn't *right across* that pretty face? Yes, it would.

However, *in the context of this image,* I think it *does* work. It's "glamour realism," sort of thing. A traveler in a worn and cluttered truck, with the sun beating down on her in the MoN. She just happens to be a naked pretty girl traveler. Would I pick it for a calender of "pretty girls who happen to be in trucks?" No. Would I display it as a worthwhile piece of photography? Absolutely.

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