First time posting

This is a shot I did earlier, any comments/ criticism welcome.

[FrankD]

Hi,
A bit small to give a real comment.
But I like the lighting although I think the right is a bit underexpossed (or is she wearing a black/red shirt ?)

The look is wonderful so is the model.
But I would love to see a bit bigger picture.

Greetings,
Frank

Thanks, here is a larger image.

[R_Fredrick_Smith]

A little to saturated and the pose is odd due to the single leg sort of thrusting out at us as if it is growing out of her hair. I think the cropping must be the cause of this.
Cheers,
rfs

[StMarc]

(after reviewing larger image)

That leg thing she's got going on is kind of surreal. It took me a minute to convince myself that that was *her* leg. I'd move that. (In the studio, not after the fact - that might be just a bit more Photoshop than you want to do.) Also, it wouldn't take but a second to fix those little discolorations on her knee once it gets where it needs to be.

The smile is nice and the pose would be okay if her leg wasn't floating in space in the center of her body. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] The lighting is acceptable, I think, but it's still a little small for precise evaluation.

M

Thanks for the input. She is wearing a black cape over her left shoulder.
As far as the leg, it looked better in the print, but it did seem to blend in with the hair in the online image. I'm fairly new to digital editing, but I can foresee a monitor calibrator in my future. Thanks again.