Lens Diaries Go Now
Glamour, Beauty, Nude, Models, Photographers

*    |  Register  


 
Go Back   Garage Glamour™ > Garage Glamour™ Community Related Forumss > Photo Reviews & Critiques Only
 

Photo Reviews & Critiques Only Constructive & professional critiques only

Reply
 
LinkBack Thread Tools Display Modes
First time posting
Old 08-26-2004, 07:07 PM   #1 (permalink)
alexjones
Guest
 
Member GG#:
Posts: n/a
Comments:

IP: 151.197.210.230
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

This is a shot I did earlier, any comments/ criticism welcome.
 
 
Re: First time posting
Old 08-27-2004, 01:11 AM   #2 (permalink)
Free Member
 
Join Date: Jun 2004
Member GG#: 39206
Location: Emmeloord
Posts: 408
Comments: 0

FrankD is offline IP: 213.84.78.250
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Hi,
A bit small to give a real comment.
But I like the lighting although I think the right is a bit underexpossed (or is she wearing a black/red shirt ?)

The look is wonderful so is the model.
But I would love to see a bit bigger picture.

Greetings,
Frank
  View Public Profile Send a private message to FrankD Visit FrankD's homepage! Find More Posts by FrankD
 
Re: First time posting
Old 08-27-2004, 05:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
alexjones
Guest
 
Member GG#:
Posts: n/a
Comments:

IP: 151.197.210.230
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Thanks, here is a larger image.
 
 
Re: First time posting
Old 08-27-2004, 01:50 PM   #4 (permalink)
Free Member

 
R_Fredrick_Smith's Avatar
 
Join Date: Jun 2003
Member GG#: 35872
Location: Dallas/Fort Worth Area
Posts: 3,660
Comments: 41

R_Fredrick_Smith is offline IP: 24.0.10.193
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

A little to saturated and the pose is odd due to the single leg sort of thrusting out at us as if it is growing out of her hair. I think the cropping must be the cause of this.
Cheers,
rfs

  View Public Profile Send a private message to R_Fredrick_Smith Visit R_Fredrick_Smith's homepage! Find More Posts by R_Fredrick_Smith
 
Re: First time posting
Old 08-27-2004, 02:41 PM   #5 (permalink)
King of Useless Facts
 
Join Date: Jan 2003
Member GG#: 35691
Location: Chicago, IL
Posts: 499
Comments: 0
Send a message via AIM to StMarc

StMarc is offline IP: 67.100.161.234
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

(after reviewing larger image)

That leg thing she's got going on is kind of surreal. It took me a minute to convince myself that that was *her* leg. I'd move that. (In the studio, not after the fact - that might be just a bit more Photoshop than you want to do.) Also, it wouldn't take but a second to fix those little discolorations on her knee once it gets where it needs to be.

The smile is nice and the pose would be okay if her leg wasn't floating in space in the center of her body. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img] The lighting is acceptable, I think, but it's still a little small for precise evaluation.

M
  View Public Profile Send a private message to StMarc Visit StMarc's homepage! Find More Posts by StMarc
 
Re: First time posting
Old 08-30-2004, 06:41 PM   #6 (permalink)
alexjones
Guest
 
Member GG#:
Posts: n/a
Comments:

IP: 151.197.48.171
 
Digg this Post!Add Post to del.icio.usBookmark Post in TechnoratiFurl this Post!
Reply With Quote

Thanks for the input. She is wearing a black cape over her left shoulder.
As far as the leg, it looked better in the print, but it did seem to blend in with the hair in the online image. I'm fairly new to digital editing, but I can foresee a monitor calibrator in my future. Thanks again.
 
 
Reply

Bookmarks

Thread Tools
Display Modes

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts

BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are Off
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are On


Similar Threads
Thread Thread Starter Forum Replies Last Post
First Time Posting Pictures JessTakesPics Main Community Forum 13 09-21-2007 04:59 AM
2nd time doing outdoor shoot and 2nd time posting Darrin Spencer Photo Reviews & Critiques Only 2 07-15-2006 11:46 PM
First time posting. RallyeXpress Photo Reviews & Critiques Only 1 09-15-2004 08:38 AM
First time posting **DONOTDELETE** Photo Reviews & Critiques Only 2 08-31-2004 07:29 AM
first time posting a photo give some input. Ron_C Photo Reviews & Critiques Only 2 05-07-2004 10:03 AM


New To Site? Need Help? Photographer & Model Links
All times are GMT -5. The time now is 12:42 PM.

© 1999-2017 Garage Glamour™




Search Engine Friendly URLs by vBSEO 3.2.0

1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30 31 32 33 34 35 36 37 38 39 40 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50 51 52 53 54 55 56 57 58 59 60 61 62 63 64 65 66 67 68 69 70 71 72 73 74 75 76 77 78 79 80 81 82 83 84 85 86 87 88 89 90 91 92 93