I like the clothing in the third one. I looked at your images on your website from the shoot with Myrthe and I see a lot of potention. I would have liked to have seen you take this shoot outdoors and use some interesting locations. Studio stuff is nice, but I think even a hallway or a park would have worked better than the white box you have her sitting on, on each and every shot. Change it up a bit - don't be confined to "SHOOTING INSIDE THE BOX" instead you had her on the box..
Nonetheless, I like the fashion behind the shoot - could do a lot of funky stuff with it. I feel the clothing is to wild for the simple commercial lighting setup you used.
just my 2 cents...