I like this photograph. It has a gritty, voyeuristic, artistic look. The pose is strong. The first model looking at the camera is holding tightly to the second model with her right arm, but seems to be pushing away with her left arm. This forces the view to question what is happening, did the photographer interrupt an intimate encounter? The expression on the first model's face doesnâ€™t seem to indicate she is shocked by the appearance of the photographer, but again she is pushing away with one arm.
What bothers me is the light on the second modelâ€™s mouth and nose. Iâ€™m also distracted by the shadow/line along the lower back of the second model. I scrolled down and cropped it out and I think the image works better. You still see enough of the legs to convey the image of the intimacy of their embrace.
Keep in mind, I'm only a beginner and I've haven't taken any classes yet so I don't know how much my opinion is worth, but you asked. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]