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Old 08-15-2004, 05:15 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I captured this images of Angela last week and honestly can't figure out how I feel about them. Critiques and comments would be greatly appreciated.

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Old 08-15-2004, 05:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The first image is a figure-looking pose -- but with a swimsuit. If she were nude (or topless in this case) it would work.

The second image is very solid. Nice use of the color wheel putting the green suit on a blond model against the red background.

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I would have to agree with the previous comment regarding the first photo. Great pose, lighting and such, but the strap across the back takes away somehow.

My only issue with the second image is, and this is just my preference and opinion, is that you cut off too much of the top of her head.

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Old 08-18-2004, 04:01 PM   #4 (permalink)
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1st picture is of no use to anyone. Not portrait, glamour, fashion...
2nd photo could have been useful as a straightforward "businesswoman" shot in your book and hers. However... the extreme cropping at the top is inappropriate for that type of shot; the bright-colored background is inappropriate: a street scene would have been better; the wrinkling of the skirt makes the shot unusable; and the lack of props/styling weakens the shot: imagine how much stronger this shot would have been outside an office building, with the outfit fully accessorized, and perhaps the girl carrying a portfolio case or briefcase or even doing something like talking on a cell phone. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/confused.gif[/img]
 
 
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