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Old 08-14-2004, 09:42 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I was inspired by another photographer to try this shot. I would love to hear some feedback on it.

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Old 08-15-2004, 12:52 PM   #2 (permalink)
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200 views and not one comment? Hmmm, is it really that bad?
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Old 08-15-2004, 02:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like it, in fact I love the concept. I like the casual, 'snapshotish' quality which gives is it a real sense of intimacy, coupled with a look of reportage. Some would probably complain that it doesn't look styled, but I think more styling would have caused it to lose the sense on intimacy. I like the overall composition. I do however wish you had used a bit more light control. The blown out cheek is distracting and the shadow on the hip and face is just a bit too deep.

From a more personal viewpoint, I think your photo is true erotica; it sets an erotic stage for the viewer to fill in. It suggests rather explicitly showing. I like it!

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It is an interesting shot for sure. I think it is a scan and I feel by the time you get it to post here it lacks the tonal quality I think you have with the original. I want to see more detail in the face (especially the eyes)when I look at her expression.

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It is an interesting shot for sure. I think it is a scan and by the time you get it to post here, it lacks the tonal quality you have with the original. I want to see more detail in the face (especially the eyes) when I look at her expression.

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Old 08-15-2004, 03:14 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Hi Doug,

This shot you posted sure looks uncomfortable for the model. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/tongue.gif[/img] I'd have a charlie horse for sure and then my wife would have to call 9-1-1 because I know I'd never get out of it. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

Good day sir! I love your work. The "O" series was particularly interesting.

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Don't fret too much about the many views with no comments. If it really sucked, you would have heard about it immediately. I like it personally. It is very candid and mysterious and leaves one wondering who it is standing there. The blurry behind on the model makes what I'm guessing is a tatoo look more like a cattle branding but I like it.

Good day sir!

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Thanks for the coments, but actually she was pretty comfortable. The 'secret' was a soft, low ottoman. BTW, you would be amazed at how popular the Orgasm series has been with women. It hasn't sold a lot of prints, instead it has helped get me numerous private commissions. The only problem with private shoots is that I can't show the results. Here's another for you.

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Thanks, Doug! Always a pleasure to see more work from that series.

Good day sir!

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Wow

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