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More from my shoot with Eve
Old 07-16-2004, 10:52 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Here's another photo from my first shoot with my 10D. Any input (even if you hate it [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img] ) is welcome and appreciated.

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Old 07-16-2004, 11:43 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Everytime I try to put a woman with a T-shirt in the toddler pool, the lifeguard starts blowing his whistle. Something about little kids being around..

Actually, I've enjoyed this series.

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Here is what I see......
Old 07-16-2004, 12:58 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I like the lighting on the face. The shoulder is way blownout. So I'd crop it to just the face. Not sure what lens you were using but the shoulder closest looks really large. It might just be the angle. Keep shooting and sharing.
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Re: More from my shoot with Eve
Old 07-16-2004, 04:12 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I have to agree about the shoulder being a bit blown out... but I would really like to see the same shot, but her eyes up towards the camera.. I like the shot orver all.. but would have liked the eyes up... just my half cent worth.


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Old 07-16-2004, 04:38 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Eve is a beautiful model and your work is outstanding. The only thing that gets me is that eye makeup. It just looks odd.

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Re: More from my shoot with Eve
Old 07-16-2004, 10:18 PM   #6 (permalink)
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The only thing I find about this image that I don't like is the makeup. IMHO, her lip liner is drawn in badly and too far away from the natural lines of her lips and the eye make-up, while nice, does not fit with the subject matter of the shoot. If you want it believable as a hot woman in a cool pool, I would tone the makeup down to more 'girl next door' rather than misplaced glamour model. Just my opinion...listen if you want. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]



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Old 07-17-2004, 12:42 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Actually, the intent of the shoot was exactly "misplaced glamour model". To be honest, we had another plan that day that did not work out, and she said "I've always wanted to jump in a swimming pool with latex pants on and see how the photos come out". So, who was I to argue [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/wink.gif[/img]

I do appreciate your comments though and understand where you are coming from! Very beautiful photo in your post by the way!
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Old 07-17-2004, 12:44 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Actually, she was going for that. I was just hoping I pulled off the photo well [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]
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Here's one you might like better.

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Old 07-17-2004, 12:54 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Thank you for the comments! I see what you are saying.

I was using a 28-90 lens at 64 (according to the RAW file data)
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