It's a very pretty picture, but I'm not clear on why it's "vintage" glamour. Black-and-white does not a vintage shot make. When I think vintage I think Bruno Bernard (http://www.bernardofhollywood.com
) or Peter Gowland (http://www.petergowland.com
That being said, for what it is, whether it's vintage or not, it's pretty good. I would have used a shallower DOF or a deeper one if I could, but I don't know the conditions under which you shot and this might have been the optimum setup. The "corner" formed by the leftmost pillow is a little distracting. That's about all the complaints I have.