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Old 06-25-2004, 07:28 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Well, after having commented on a few of other's images, perhaps it's time to put a couple of mine up on the block.

Jill spent the afternoon with several of us at the Fort Worth stockyards, so the cowgirl outfit is entirely appropriate for the location!

These two are 100% crops with only a mild unsharp mask applied, otherwise no RAW or PS manipulation. Normally the copyright would be placed slightly inside the image, but for the sake of the critique, it's outside the image in the border.






So, whatcha think?

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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-25-2004, 07:34 PM   #2 (permalink)
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2nd pic is great, very sexy, a great pose, gorgeous eyes, and well executed. The hat brim over the left eye is a bit low, though.

The first pic has too much contrast between the bright sun on the left and the model - the eye is drawn to the bright patch by her knee. I would crop out that part of the pic. Just MHO of course as I'm a beginner meself.

Good work though! I'd like to see more of Jill.
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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-25-2004, 09:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Having grown up in a hick/logging town, I grew to hate the cowboy motife... but that second photo comes close to changing my mind.
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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-25-2004, 11:40 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I agree with the rest... first photo looks like a high school pic, but the second photo shows a lot of personality and sexiness.
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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-26-2004, 01:25 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Another beginner here [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/laugh.gif[/img]
I love the second one, although normally I like pictures taken from eyelevel or below.

The first one is a nice pose, but the very bright area on the topleft takes the picture away for me.

Lovely model by the way.

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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-28-2004, 04:35 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Well, guys... I tend to agree with everyone's comments about the 1st image. Here's a different crop, with some adjustments in PS...



though I'm still not real happy losing her gorgeous legs (even if they got them cockroach stompers on 'em).

Kent - I understand exactly what you mean about the cowboy outfits... but, dang it... a pretty young lass in a pair of Ropers, or a denim skirt like that just has to fall into a different category!

Simon - to be sure, I'll be posting more of Jill as I can.

Thanks, all!

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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-28-2004, 10:44 AM   #7 (permalink)
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Wayne,

That crop is much better on this photo. Yeah, the legs were nice, but they were also blown out on the knees like was already said. I think does the much more justice.

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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-29-2004, 04:42 PM   #8 (permalink)
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Mike,

That shure are a nice filly you got thar. I hope the upkeep ai'nt gonna cost you an arm an a leg.

But heck pardner, them thar rings I hop are not for her reins... that would hurt a piece..


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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-29-2004, 08:29 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Hi Mike,

To coin a phrase: Damn, she's hot! Great image but what really does it for me is the neckerchief she's wearing for a top. Whooo hoooo! I'm in love. [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/grin.gif[/img]

Great smile, sexy outfit! Thanks for sharing!

Good day!

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Re: Two for critique
Old 06-29-2004, 08:52 PM   #10 (permalink)
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Thanks Mike. I'll pass that on to the model.

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