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Old 06-22-2004, 02:06 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Adrienne on a hot summer parking lot day. Would like some feedback.
Could have used one of those beers in Ed's car pic from an earlier post.



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Old 06-22-2004, 04:21 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Jim,

It's really hard to light these kind of shots. You however didn't do half bad. It still kinda feels like a snapshot of a pretty girl, though. It's o.k. if that's what you're going for. Somehow I don't think you are.

Here's what I don't like about it. I don't like the doorjam on the right side of the picture. The rust isn't very becoming of that shot. Also, the car doesn't look finished. I don't like that either. There's also this black spot on the model's left collar bone. What's that a shadow?

Now, here's what I do. I like what I think you were going for. I dig rockabilly and hot rods and that whole scene. It's a great concept. Just take a look at Ole Skool Rodz Magazine.

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Re: Whatcha think?
Old 06-22-2004, 05:11 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks Mike,
Your right, it has that snapshop feeling to me too. I wish I had more time,
gobo's, reflectors, finished car,(I don't think it was real paint, looked more
like priner to me) better location, assistants, you know... The spot on her
collar bone, I don't know what it was, it bothers me too, sorry I missed it.
Had a lot of fun though.
Thanks for the input. Here's another for the road.

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Old 06-23-2004, 07:27 AM   #4 (permalink)
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You don't need all those things. I think the first image suffers from being too tightly framed or cropped. A nice looking blonde, great dress, great legs, and a cool car, even if it isn't finished. A shot of her behind the wheel, one leg draped out, dress flirtingly showing some leg, shot from a lower angle with much more car showing would have been great. Something to reflect a little more light into the interior could be as simple as white cardboard. Your second image has all the elements I referenced above and is a nicer shot, although cutting down the depth of focus on the trees would cause the viewer's eye to concentrate more on the model and the car.
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Old 06-23-2004, 07:53 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Hi Jim,

This model is very, very sexy to be sure. I think she has "the look" that works great for this kind of image. I would like to see a bit more illumination inside the vehicle to perhaps highlight her hair a bit more. I think that maybe a reflector off to her left shining some light in through the rear window would suffice. I also bet this type of shot would look incredible in black and white with a Mafia-type theme. She just has that look to pull off a shot like that with flying colors, er, flying black and white?! [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/smile.gif[/img]

The door jamb doesn't really bother me too much but it does seem to jump right out of the picture when I look closely at it....a 3D effect of sorts. I gues that is to be expected because in reality, it's probably a good 18 inches closer to me than her head is.

Great idea! Gorgeouse model! Keep going with this idea. I like it.

Thanks for sharing! Good day!

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Old 06-23-2004, 10:00 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Thanks Michael... Light though the back window would have helped alot.
I'll keep that in mind next time. I do like it better in black and white.
Also burned the door jam and shortened two of the poles in the background.
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Thanks Michael... Light though the back window would have helped alot.
I'll keep that in mind next time. I do like it better in black and white.
Also burned the door jam and shortened two of the poles in the background.
Work in Progress [img]/ubbthreads/images/graemlins/cool.gif[/img] From every critique I see something new.
Thanks,
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Jim,

Pardon my jumping in here... but that B&W hits me... great conversion... I like it alot... maybe even if you left her in full color and the rest B&W.. but that is just my thinking.. not a complaint.


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