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Old 06-11-2004, 11:03 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Here's a recent shot for your comments and critique.



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Old 06-11-2004, 11:19 PM   #2 (permalink)
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There are two things about this photo that bother me. One is that her eyes look really funky. Ok, what is funky, you ask. Well, her right eye appears very dark all around; can't see the whites on both sides of her pupils. It's just an anamoly that makes her face look a bit disjointed. The second item is that her hand that she is resting on is pushing the skin up and causing distortions on the right side of her face. I'm still up in the air as far as how the hair across her face works in the image but the other two items stand out to me as problems to correct. Thanks for sharing and have a most excellent weekend!!

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Old 06-11-2004, 11:23 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for your feedback.
It's that kind of attention to detail that I need to learn to pay attention to.
Enjoy your weekend too.

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