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Old 03-16-2009, 06:52 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I finally had a chance to shoot this weekend. I would appreciate any feedback on how I could improve. The photo was taken in an old mill that has been converted to lofts. Thanks.



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She has a Anna Nicole Smith look to her. The focus is a little soft for me, could well be what you were aiming for though. Nothing going on in the sky just a big white space that draws my eyes away from her boobs every so often. If you have strobes I would have used them and brought your sync speed up to bring in some of that sky detail.
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She has a Anna Nicole Smith look to her. The focus is a little soft for me, could well be what you were aiming for though. Nothing going on in the sky just a big white space that draws my eyes away from her boobs every so often. If you have strobes I would have used them and brought your sync speed up to bring in some of that sky detail.

Thanks for the feedback. It was raining at the time and I was leaning out the other window, somewhat awkwardly, as the ledge was very narrow. My intent was to focus on her eyes but I think I moved.

The flash was sitting on the counters. Oops!
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