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Old 02-26-2009, 12:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: New Studio work with Monik
Old 02-26-2009, 10:01 AM   #2 (permalink)
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#1) Using too short focal length, which causes distortion. Left arm appears much larger than right arm.

#2) Again.. to short focal length. Foot and leg appear very large, and the body is distorted... foot on floor needed better posing.
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Re: New Studio work with Monik
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1) Highlights on face look blown out on my screen

2) Yikes, not to sure about the color of the background with that towel

3) Again problem with color of lace and her top, would be much better without the lace. The lighting on her looks to be the best in this one.

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Re: New Studio work with Monik
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Both the background and towel in #2 are too "busy" looking, with too many colors and patterns. They distract away from the model, IMO.
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