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Nawti Tawti
Old 01-15-2009, 11:45 PM   #1 (permalink)
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First edit from my shoot today with Tatiana.

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Beautiful, exotic model.

I find that my eye wanders about - there isn't a strong focal point. I think her face (the natural place to focus) isn't lit quite enough to compete effectively with her navel jewel and the light playing on her midriff. And a touch more light in the hair would have brought out a bit of texture.

I'm no Photoshop guru, but I suspect this could be improved in PS pretty readily.

On the other hand, if I were you, I'd shoot with her again. She's gorgeous.

Nice work. Thanks for sharing.
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Old 01-17-2009, 03:27 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Thanks for the useful feedback. I completely agree about the detail in the hair being lost. That, for the most part was a result of my post processing. On the other hand, the pose that she is in has three leading lines that move the viewers eyes to her face; the curve of her body and her two arms. I'm not in agreement about lighting her face more to put the emphasis there.

Here's a re-edit to bring out more detail in her hair.

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Second version is MUCH better! I'm not sure of the crop cutting into both arms the way it does.
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