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Old 01-24-2008, 12:22 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This was from a visit to a friends studio where I met her daughter Heather. This was one of my first tries at pin-up.
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Very nice. But you need to put a link to the large shot you uploaded since this one is hard to tell whether eyes are sharp or where she is looking. Here is the linkL

http://www.glamour1.com/photoplog/im.../1_Heather.jpg

I would also consider cropping to put her a bit off center which often works better for this pose. Here is an example:


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Thanks RFS, I like what you did to this, and thanks for posting the link.
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Maybe move it a little to the right, but in my opinion, the latter image is cropped too tight.
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Agreed. You can only do so much in post. I'm one of the old school that thinks you need to get the cropping close in the camera. To move right, you have to add more photo on the left. I did that a bit in the example to move it right.
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