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Old 11-22-2007, 12:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: ashley
Old 11-22-2007, 04:43 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice shot. You might try cropping either of these two ways to create a little dynamic tension in the shot (usually you don't want the main subject centered).


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Old 11-22-2007, 06:42 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Great shot!
I agree with Mr Smith both crops look better than the first one.
The light is causing no shadows on her, which isn't exactly a bad thing just something I think would add some drama to the photo.

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Re: ashley
Old 11-22-2007, 06:52 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I concur with the others. This is a really nice shot!

I also kind of like the 2nd crop, where the model is closer to the right side of the frame, of Mr. Smiths. Although I have to say that for my own taste I don't care for the crop where the model is crowded to the left side of the frame. That forms an uneasy type of tension for me.

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Old 11-23-2007, 01:10 PM   #5 (permalink)
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IAlthough I have to say that for my own taste I don't care for the crop where the model is crowded to the left side of the frame. That forms an uneasy type of tension for me.
I agree there. RG mentioned a theory about language and the way a viewer's eyes "enter" a photograph. The theory is that for those of us who read left to right, our eyes "enter" a photo that way. Space on the left is acceptable -- even comforting. For those who read the opposite direction or even vertically, the interpretation of space in photographic composition is perhaps different.

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Old 12-29-2007, 04:53 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Nice shot.I like it.Thanks for sharing.
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I like the stonework too much to suggest getting rid of all of it. I'd suggest a tighter crop at the top and slightly tighter on the right side of the image.

AMAZING model, great pose and lighting, and you did an excellent job with her eyes.
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