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Say hi the Misha, C&C PLEASE!!!
Old 11-19-2007, 04:39 PM   #1 (permalink)
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My first full scale shoot where I set up the entire shoot, I got the location, the model (Misha) the MUA (Angel) and as you will see later the Mustang.


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Re: Say hi the Misha, C&C PLEASE!!!
Old 11-19-2007, 05:18 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Just a few quick C&C notes:

#1 seems to have more red spill than is needed (although perhaps that is what you were going for). Also seems to be some splotches at the bottom of the photo. Is is possible that you had some smoke there or something, or is this just some artifacts or PS problems? The background is a little busy with the red thing on the right very prominent and too much of it showing. The model is too centered, so I think a different cropping might have helped.

#2 composition seems a little awkward. The the little yellow bottle is distracting. It either needs to play a integral role in the scene or just not be seen at all.

#3 has the most potential pose and composition wise, but the lighting is not adequate. It would have been better with as much light on her here as in #2. Also if she leans in a little more the pose works better. I would also get rid of the little yellow clip in the foreground since it draws attention.

#4 makes the model look a little chunky due to the pose. Should move her more to the left and let more of the machine on the right show up to accent the action that could be implied.

Hope these notes help.

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