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Old 11-02-2007, 08:04 AM   #1 (permalink)
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First time shoot with Quincy.




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Old 11-02-2007, 08:26 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Well shot -- that necklace could have been a problem, but the reflection looks good. The only suggestion I can offer is that you might consider 2 changes to improve her eyes: 1) her head tilt could be reduced -- minimizing the canoeing effect, and 2) brighten the environment to shrink her pupils, emphasizing the color of her iris more
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Old 11-02-2007, 11:24 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Hi Jim,

I agree with Chuck on the eyes. More light, smaller pupils, more eye color resulting. Her smile looks a bit forced too but perhaps that's just her normal smile.

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Old 11-02-2007, 05:23 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I pretty much like everything except her expression, mouth, and eyes.
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Old 11-03-2007, 12:45 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Well shot -- that necklace could have been a problem, but the reflection looks good. The only suggestion I can offer is that you might consider 2 changes to improve her eyes: 1) her head tilt could be reduced -- minimizing the canoeing effect, and 2) brighten the environment to shrink her pupils, emphasizing the color of her iris more
Good, I like that, your critique is all based on factual things that would do just as you suggested. We did have the room a little too dark when we shot this image and it would make for larger eye pupils.

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Old 11-03-2007, 03:06 PM   #6 (permalink)
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I think one thing everyone is missing in there critique... Freckles... I love thoughs freckles... Great images. Keep up the great work.

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Old 11-04-2007, 12:45 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I think one thing everyone is missing in there critique... Freckles... I love thoughs freckles... Great images. Keep up the great work.

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That was something that came up in another post a while back. Somone commented that he didn't like freckles on the model while another person did.
I am fine with freckles even though it could be more of a challenge to do any editing around them while keeping them in tact.

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Based on some other recent comments I might wonder if it is supposed to be someones fault that a person didn't like the freckles or if he thought they made the model look bad. Just curious.
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Based on some other recent comments I might wonder if it is supposed to be someones fault that a person didn't like the freckles or if he thought they made the model look bad. Just curious.
Of course. Just like it's your fault if the model is blond instead of brunette.

Now you are just being petulant.
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Of course. Just like it's your fault if the model is blond instead of brunette.

Now you are just being petulant.
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