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Old 09-17-2007, 11:00 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I haven't posted any pics in a while altho I've shot quite a few. Here's one from last night that I kinda like. MUA Vera, Model Devin, Canon 5D w/85mm prime, ISO 100, f/5.6 @ 125, some lights, some reflectors, some freckles.

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Old 09-17-2007, 11:09 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Lighting is spot on! And your model did a great job also. It's refreshing seeing some not so post processed images. Beautiful work Jimmy. If you get a chance post a couple more.
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Old 09-18-2007, 07:43 AM   #3 (permalink)
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"some lights, some reflectors, some freckles."
A whole lotta freckles.
Very nice, IMO. Thanks for sharing.
(Does make me realize how hard hands are to do gracefully when grasping something.)
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Old 09-18-2007, 09:17 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Hmmmmm.....
nuttin to "critique," as if I would,...think I'll just say "good job"
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Old 09-18-2007, 12:21 PM   #5 (permalink)
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I am not a big fan of the back of the hand and knuckles towards the camera. I also would have loved to see a tad more lighting in the left eye.

I DO love freckles!!

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Old 09-18-2007, 04:02 PM   #6 (permalink)
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"... not a big fan of the back of the hand and knuckles towards the camera"
Me too. But I can't envision how to position the hand otherwise for this image without awkward angles or unnatural bends. Yet I like the general pose. Got any advice?
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Old 09-18-2007, 04:55 PM   #7 (permalink)
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"... not a big fan of the back of the hand and knuckles towards the camera"
Me too. But I can't envision how to position the hand otherwise for this image without awkward angles or unnatural bends. Yet I like the general pose. Got any advice?

To me the whole arm looks a bit too masculine. Can't quite tell what she is laying on or holding onto to offer any suggestions.
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Old 09-18-2007, 05:16 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I like the lighting on the hair...I am not a fan of freckles. Just as an observation, the pose compresses her torso from my point of view. Also, the crop at the bottom of the dress distracts my eyes trying to figure out if there are two knees there. I think I would clone out the back of the bench as the catch light on it pull my eyes from her. Regards, the other "Jimmy"



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Old 09-18-2007, 05:51 PM   #9 (permalink)
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I am not a fan of freckles.

Man Oh Man! C'mon dude! You gotta love freckles!

Freckles are like a map on a beautiful woman, and sometimes, you get to connect the dots.
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at first, I read "girl on a BEACH" and was very disappointed at the lack of sand in this shot...

but then I realized.
tehehe

wonderful image Jimmy! like always.
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