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Some recents shots - suggestions welcome
Old 09-03-2007, 11:58 PM   #1 (permalink)
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A few images from a couple of recent shoots. Always looking to improve.







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Re: Some recents shots - suggestions welcome
Old 09-04-2007, 12:48 PM   #2 (permalink)
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1. The screaming red top takes away from the image. The first place my eyes go is to the red. IF this was a fashion shoot showcasing the top, you won. I assume it wasn't. I like most everything else about it.
2. Some back lighting (separation) would have been nice and added some punch to the image. Tell your models to STOP lining the bottom of their eyes. It looks bad and makes their eyes look smaller.
3. Don't crop at a joint, ie, wrist, elbow, knee, ankle...
4. Again, the cropping bothers me.

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Re: Some recents shots - suggestions welcome
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1. The screaming red top takes away from the image. The first place my eyes go is to the red. IF this was a fashion shoot showcasing the top, you won. I assume it wasn't. I like most everything else about it.
2. Some back lighting (separation) would have been nice and added some punch to the image. Tell your models to STOP lining the bottom of their eyes. It looks bad and makes their eyes look smaller.
3. Don't crop at a joint, ie, wrist, elbow, knee, ankle...
4. Again, the cropping bothers me.

Keep working hard. You're well on your way!
Thanks for the feedback!
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Re: Some recents shots - suggestions welcome
Old 09-04-2007, 10:34 PM   #4 (permalink)
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You know, I kinda like the first image due to the contrast in color tempratures. The rest are strong as well, jsut the first one pops out at me.

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great shots was number 3 phot taken with a ring flash. if so was that the only light source

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# 1 pops.....all nice images....
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great shots was number 3 phot taken with a ring flash. if so was that the only light source

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Yes ring flash as cingular light source on that image. Thanks!
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