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Old 09-02-2007, 07:50 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Few Images from a quick session yesterday. I should have had her remove the jewelery.



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Re: Jasmine Van Dyke
Old 09-02-2007, 09:22 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Nice and colorful. I'm not sure the jewelry is a major problem. But I do find the cropping of #2 to be lacking. It would be much better cropped above the knees or including the feet.

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Re: Jasmine Van Dyke
Old 09-02-2007, 09:27 PM   #3 (permalink)
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... I should have had her remove the jewelery.

Leave the jewelry but lose the skirt... half-on skirt just doesn't go with the rest of the 'look'.
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Old 09-02-2007, 10:53 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I kinda like them, jewelry looks fine, skirt doesn't bother me.

One suggestion is to have her wayyyyy forward from the background paper, you can see where the roll hit the floor and bends. Digital compression makes it worse, opening up a few stops might blur it out of focus, but in shot one its gone from the crop.

I think they look nice!
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Look great to me. I'd agree with cropping #2 above the knee. It will eliminate the pool ... but the amputee thing with the feet is distracting. The crop will also get rid of the noticeable bend in the background paper.
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