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Old 07-12-2007, 11:36 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey, here is some of my portrait work. please tell me what you think, some constructive critisim would be nice.

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Old 07-13-2007, 12:44 PM   #2 (permalink)
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i'll take a stab at a couple of these (you might consider posting less images in a single post to generate more c&c)

Image #1: Too much headroom. Use the rule of thirds and place the subject in the frame more off-centered. It will make for a more interesting image.

Image #3: Best of the lot IMO. You probly should have brought her right arm into the frame so as to keep balance in the frame, yet not to amputate part of her right hand.

Image #6: Again, Rule of Thirds. Plus,slightly too much headroom and amputated fingers.

Image #7: Personally, I would have put the point-of-focus on the girl.
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Re: first portrait post
Old 07-13-2007, 01:35 PM   #3 (permalink)
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I think it would be much more respectful of our time to post just one image that you want some well thought out comments and suggestions.

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Re: first portrait post
Old 07-13-2007, 02:10 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I think #3 is the best of the lot, but I think it would be better with a bit more light on her face, and get rid of the bracelet on her right arm.

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I think it would be much more respectful of our time to post just one image that you want some well thought out comments and suggestions.

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ill keep that in mind for the next time
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