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Old 06-21-2007, 11:18 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Re: Randoms around sunset
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Very nice use of the Golden Hour.
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Re: Randoms around sunset
Old 06-22-2007, 09:34 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Nice framing and exposures. Maybe just a bit too yellow on the skin tone.
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The cropping is a bit too tight on that last image IMO, and there is a lack of detail in the hair. It just goes to jet black with no detail. Other than that, nice work and beautiful model.

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Re: Randoms around sunset
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i like them all the light and the color is terrific. i just wish she wasnt swimming in her dress, it seems a size or two too large for her. it mask's her lovely hair as well.
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Simon and Garfunkel had it right... if you had slowed down and applied yourself - you'd have one really strong image in that look, rather than three mediocre. I'd love to see you shoot it again, but with an image in your head of what you'd like it to look like when you're done.
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these look like high school senior pictures.
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these look like high school senior pictures.
Well, they are actually for a local girl next door contest, so...

I tried to pull the yellow back a bit but it looked even worse - I need to remember sunset + Asian skin with some tanner on it makes a bad combo! For what it is worth, this is also this girl's first shoot ever.

I see what you are saying guys. Thanks for the feedback!
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