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Old 05-04-2007, 05:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Few changes and typos but let me know what you think.

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Overall a nice concept and design layout that is easy to navigate.

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Mike:

Clean, easy and intuitive to navigate, well designed, strong images.

Well done.

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Very nice Mike,..classy look to it, well done. I didn't see any typos.
Be nice if the home page images looped instead of ending, and the first thing I tried clicking was the word Galleries, thinking it was a link.
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Love the layout, the speed and being able to see so much of your work in one place.

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Old 05-05-2007, 08:35 PM   #6 (permalink)
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Here are a few little observations.I would recommend putting two spaces at the end of each sentence's period. Like this. I got this from the first paragraph of your artist statement. It makes readability much greater.

When you are listing the various "their" items, just put one their in and separate the rest by commas. IE Their face, legs, hands, toes, etc. I know you mean to emphasize Their, but it just comes across as redundant.

Under Creation/Portfolios, set off your first paragraph listing with a colon : , not a semi-colon ; .

The picture links on the sensual gallery, didn't work for me today. It worked the second time I visited.

I would start with image number 2 on the maternity rather than image number 1 which I would put much later in the list if at all. She has great facial expression, but the image makes her look fat, not pregnant.

The images are nicely exposed and have good color. I would like to see more images that look like a model portfolio as long as you mention it in your verbiage.
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Mike,

The site looks great and navigation is a snap. The overall impact is very professional and clean.

I agree with KG that image #2 should lead the Maternity gallery. Also, I would suggest opening the Sensual gallery with image 15, 18, or (top pick) 31.

As for the word "their", I would think that your services are marketed to women- perhaps your artist statement should speak to them instead of about them. "Her" is more feminine (brownie points) and "your" would be more direct (bonus).

A few tweaks, perhaps, but the site conveys your message and showcases your images nicely. Good work.

That's just my opinion, I could be a can of corn.

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Great input, thanks everyone.
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