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Old 03-05-2007, 10:37 PM   #1 (permalink)
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laying in front of the fire one night thinking about making some money,



got an idea!



Maybe I could become one of those Playboy Bunnies,



and pose in lingerie,



a girl can dream,..can't she?

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Old 03-05-2007, 10:45 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Wow...I can't say enough about these. Great work...really like the addition of the glasses
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I like them all. At first I really liked #2, but her hand holding her jacket closed kind of looks un-natural. So now I think #1 is my fav. The black outfit series is really nice too. Ok so l really like them all.
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Old 03-05-2007, 11:44 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hi Ron,

Here are my comments for your consideration.

Image 1: I would have removed the phone, or used a cordless phone. Money, sophistication, and an old styled phone with a cord don't seem to fit together. Also, the upper right seems significantly brighter than the rest of the picture.

Image 2: Same phone and lighting comments. Her left hand seems a bit awkward to me. I like the play with the glasses.

Image 3: Same phone and light comments. Her left hand seems awkward with the spacing of her fingers and missing thumb. Her pose looks a bit awkward as well.

Image 4: I like the bright light contrasted with the dark image. Her pose seems more comfortable and natural. This is my favorite photo of the bunch. I didn't realize this next comment until I looked at Image 5. In Image 4, you've got her perfectly framed with the thirds rule.

Image 5: Similar to Image 4 except the vertical photo doesn't work as well for me. I seem more drawn the fireplace than I am to her. The fireplace is bright and occupies more of the screen. For whatever reason her image doesn't jump out at me like she does in Image 4. It might be the thirds rule or might the vertical versus horizontal image.

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Thanks,..the props were Serena's idea.
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Glad you like them, Thanks for replying.
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Thanks Kevin,..I DO appreciate your comments, and find them helpful.
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The magazines look to carefully placed. They drew my eye right away. I would have had them look a bit more scattered and not quite so lined up neatly. It looks like they should be on a coffee table instead of on the floor. Also if you cropped it so the magazines were going off the frame, so they could help to lead the eye towards the subject. They are sitting there like islands instead.

Additionally, maybe if her position was a little bit angled relative to the brickwork of the fireplace. Create some different angles. Everything looks so parallel to the horizontal.

Otherwise, I like the concept, and she is posed nicely, in a 'sophisticated/seductive' kind of way!
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