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Pictures of Mari... Please Critique
Old 02-25-2007, 02:44 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hey everyone. This was a shoot I did a couple nights ago. Meet Mari, first time in front of a camera. She was nervous at first but once I put the techno music on she really seemed to relax. That trick always seems to work for me. Can I please get some technical feedback. Thanks
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Old 02-25-2007, 06:50 AM   #2 (permalink)
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In the colour image to me she seems a little too square on to the camera and I would have bent the left arm slightly... Otherwise it's a very good image. the fingers are nicely spread...

In the monochrome image the highlights a little burnt out, maybe they can be brought back with the shadow highligt tool in PS... Again a very attractive image, lovely model with beautiful eyes and a lovely pout...
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Old 02-25-2007, 02:13 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Yes, I can see what you mean by her left arm and being too square to the frame. It's a little static maybe.

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Nice work,I like 1st image.The light seem good reflect onto her.
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In the second shot, her chin seems a bit high. That gives me the impression she is leaning away from me. It's a nice shot, but those few millimeters just make her seem like she's somewhat withdrawing from the viewer.

It's a tricky situation since a standard of glamour shots with models running their hands through their hair is to have the model lift their chins, close their eyes, and part their lips in feigned ectasy. I don't know if that's where you were heading or not.

I like the first shot more, but the jacket seems to have lost any detail, at least on my monitor. I think I would have tried a little less exposure as it, her skin, and her hair are so light. But that's me looking at this image on a crappy laptop monitor... I'll bet you only took an incident reading with your flashmeter though.

Beautiful girl, and I love sexy denim shots...
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