Originally Posted by mkphotovideo
...thought I would share and see what ya'll think about these! Any comments, criticisms, thoughts are eagerly accepted....
Technically, it looks like you nailed the exposures... for the most part, the lighting shows that you've got a good grip on light versus shadows, though the last image looks a bit flat, lighting wise, but it's not objectionable. Beautiful model!
My only other comment is that in some of the shots (#2 definitely, #3 and #4 somewhat) her expressions don't make me believe that she's having fun or, to put it another way, her expressions don't support the idea that she's really getting into showing herself off in such intimate poses. Your first and last images, on the other hand, definitely show a woman that's into what's happening...
Over the years, you can tell which photogs understand that the eyes and the face (the model's expression) are the most important part of a glamour image by the selections they chose to show off... thus leading me to my Rule #1 - never display anything but your best, and your best should be something that shows the model having fun or enjoying the activity being portrayed. She doesn't have to be smiling (#1 certainly isn't) but it certainly doesn't hurt (#4).
Here's Lisa... I hope it shows that she was enjoying herself!