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Old 12-04-2006, 10:17 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Messed around with a few things last night... what do you guys think? The model is my friend Heather.









*EDIT I went back and tried to make the images a little less flat... are these any better?





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I think the first has the most potential, but needs an area in focus - like her shoes. (Or, alternately, and equally probable, my eyes are just totally out of wack.) All seem a bit flat for my taste. Congrats on trying some creative work, though. Good idea, IMO - but needs more work.
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They're just a bit too flat for my taste for B&W. There really is no crisp "punch" to those. No range of gray tones.

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well dave, hopefully you'll fix that when I'm at your workshop saturday!
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It's in the processing of the image and working with the tones and curves. All I'm providing Saturday is cookies and milk.
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Much better!!
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Thanks Dave.
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I agree - the revised images are better. Still think the first (now last) is the best, but it still needs a sharply focussed area. Much better, though.
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